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for spring (2)

Even in spring the snow falls, gentle, a slower dance then winter. Cold white caps bury April’s first colors, leaving only scattered petals and dark branches.  The sun hangs distant and aloof behind heavy clouds.

There is still beauty in this death of things.

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