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Gently



Gently,
a soft, cool breeze
whispers through the darkness
easing the spirit caught, setting
it free.




~~~~~~~~~

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I don't know when I wrote this, it may already be in here...don't know why it was in my drafts folder. Another Cinquain...

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  • Mari Goes gold member
    April 9

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    Hm, love the sense of freedom I read in this poem.
    gentle, gently, she spills the ink and leave us smiling


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    April 8
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    A refreshing, take-a-deep-breath
    feeling you have created!

    M-C


  • Yemassee gold member
    April 6

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    I like it Mi. See, it pays to look around on old folders.

    the breeze here has that soothing effect (much like Moxie does to me, lol) and that is what most of us seek I think, letting all those hurts, all those emotions and memories free.

    You are on a cinquain roll.