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Dear Mr. Darkness

Dear,
Mr. Darkness

We have came a long way. We’ve both sat in the depth with dismay. Flet feelings that we didn’t think were possible. Held on to something we thought would ler go. We’ve loved. We’ve lost… won, and lost again.

We’ve both clutched on to a bottle of pills, telling ourselves we had to go. We both wanted to die.

We hid ourselves in the dark corner on our room, trying to gather our thoughts. We went nights without sleep.  we ate little, but did drink.

We’ve both thoughts we were worthless. And were ridiculed by someone that had no praise.

  We’ve both used excessive amount of eye liner to make ourselves, look more… dark?  We both suffered eternal damage both from the heart and soul.
               
                        We both were told ‘no’…

We both carved our love’s name somewhere and some place.

    We’ve both thought to ourselves
                ‘This is the end’

                    We’ve lost friends’

We’ve both stayed up thinking to another’s well being.
            We’ve cried
We’ve been hurt,
Lost,
      And died
Over and over again.
            We’ve walked the burning sand.

And I ask you Dear Mr. Darkness
Surrender your key. Let me into the gates of your hell to relies your anguish and fears. Take me somewhere, where I can keep you safe.

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Its nothing really! Just something I kinda had to get off my chest... I know its not that good!

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  • Dani M.paz
    July 10
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    wow,nice write,never completly put too much thought about it.

  • Wow, this is courageous, a darkness that seems appealing all the same. Looking back is as much a tonic to see where you've come from. lovely darkness in fact.

  • its cute