When I'm dead and gone,
When there isn't even the breeze to remember me,
I hope you will.
When I'm old and no longer pretty,
When not even I remember my name,
I hope you will.
When everything is going down hill,
When I don't want to remember anything,
I hope you will.
When my life is at it's end,
My soul don't want me,
I hope you will.
When I call your name,
Ask you to marry me,
I hope you will.
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Comments
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Aww this was so deeply
emotional and heartfelt.
But, it was beautifully
expressed
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Thank you for your fine entry.
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sadly i am going to have to DQ due to the comment before mine (rules state no comments on the piece)
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so heartfelt and cute :] though the line
"My soul don't want me," properly would be
my soul does not want me.
but either way i loved this piece
thanks for entering -
I liked this. It had a sweet vulnerability about this that made it quite endearing :-)
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