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Belly Dancer!

Seductive insanity swirls in indigo cyclones,
Curvy hips thrust away the silent beats of stillness,
Trapping flashes inside her ample bosoms.

Beads of sweat beautifully cleanse tanned skin
Thighs sway from side to side,
Forming tempting rhythms that dance along
never-forgotten memories.

Cascades of ebony hair dress her bare shoulders,
Long mascaraed lashes draw the eyes in black
As she glances around her own reflection.

 

Author notes

I've watched this beautiful belly dancer in Lebanon last summer , she's ughhhh, gorgeous... I just remembered her!!yah and I thought that it would be nice to describe her!! Bellly Dancing seems awesome!!

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  • a59teeth
    May 10

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    very cool

    belly dancing is so sexy and seductive and so natural it seems. i can see why this lebanese dancer would enchant you and you've written well about it! good luck and cool write!


  • trekkergirl
    April 18

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    You really used descriptive imagery very well here. With you words I was able to see her through your eyes. Very well written. Thanks for sharing this with us.

  • thanks for your comment


  • BrokenSanity
    April 10

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    I like it.. and I've always wanted to belly dance! Lol. Well written, the imagery is beautiful. I liked the last line... very dramatic.
    Thank you for enteringm and good luck!

  • I like it!!!

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