Verse 1:
Shards of broken glass,
You lie there on the floor
The wind comes passing by
Sweeping you to my door.
Scratched splinters,
You're scattered near the door
My eyes get hold of you,
I knock the dust from your eyes
And stick the pieces,
so they're whole,
so they're whole.
Chorus
Now when the wind comes,
You won't fail to walk,
Your heart won't hesitate
To show the love it holds for me.
Verse two
You scream out loud,
Time walks by you
Making days and weeks
Endless pain ,to endure.
Verse three.
I hold you close,
Right to my soul,
I hear the pounds of your heart
As they rise and fall,
I kiss the scars,
Right on your skin,
I change your frown
into a grin.
Verse Four:
Promises uttered
By the emotions of my heart,
Cannot hold a word from falling apart,
Yet one thing I know pretty well,
In your eyes I wish I'd dwell.
[Forever until you break again]
Author notes
I know I sucked at this!! First time to write a song ever!! At least I tried something new!!This is a song I would love if someone would sing it to me !!
A contest entry
- Write a Love Song... to Yourself! by Loveberry.
1500 points, ended April 27, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
plz tell me what do you think??
Comments
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thanks much for your comment
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the wonderful thing about music and songs in general is that it is all subjective- you can make it any way you wish! ....want to hear the other good thing? -this piece has no need to be subjectively defined, it was magnificent in and of itself!
very emotional, pretty damn relatable... for a first song, you did a fabulous job! i actually went through and read it a second time, and that second time made all the difference...
great job! and good luck in the contest
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