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Hotel Kennmore

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Having just arrived in town,
I called an old friend, I hadn't seen for quite a while.
When I asked him if there was a place to stay, nearby,
he told me to just sit tight. He would be right down.

You can stay with me. I've got a place.
It's not far from the station.
So I grabbed my bags and followed him
as he explained he had plenty of space.

You're sure the wife and kids won't mind?
He said, It's not a problem.
We have our own place. There's lots of room.
I said , you're very kind.

Down one alley and then another and then there was one more.
We ended our journey, four blocks away, behind an appliance store.
The wife and kids are asleep in the car and me, I sleep right here.
This is my box, the big one here, the one that's labeled "Kennmore".

What happened, I asked, in total amazement?
You had it all so good!
The bank foreclosed. They took my cars and work's impossible to find.
My family and I had nowhere to go. We had to make other arrangements.

I'm sure, he said, that things will get better.
Our spirit is not yet broken.
My hands may be tied,
But at least we're still together.

We get some food from the pantry, that people kindly donate.
Can I interest you in some "Corn Flakes"? They’re dry, but still taste great.
We don't have much, but what we've got, we'll gladly share with you!

My house is your house. We should sleep, it's getting pretty late.


I spent the night in the refrigerator box. A shelter without a door.

When I woke, we said goodbye. I put a c-note on the dashboard.

I will never forget how warm it was,

that night at the "Hotel Kennmore"!

 

 

 

 



 

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This is a rhyme scheme with the first and fourth lines rhyming in each stanza. A little different but I thought I would try it.

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  • Patpowers silver member
    May 10

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    I wish I could give you ten smilies...I will do it now! THIS IS A BRILLIANT PIECE! I commend you for what you do my friend. Thanks again for this true to life poem!


    • Gunther gold member
      May 11
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      Thanks for reading this poem. This work is important to me and people need to be more aware of the crapp going on around them.
      Thanks again for all your comments, my friend!---Mark

  • Brian A
    April 19

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    Alright. This is something I really like to see. Poetry with an idea, a meaning. Most people just use poetry as a device for introspection, as if the world only wants to hear of them. I'm a fan of poetry of a more... social nature. Great work, both on and off the computer it seems...


    • Gunther gold member
      April 20
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      Thanks for your kind words. This stuff is important to get out there. Thank you for your consideration of this poem in your contest. I really appreciate it!


  • individuality gold member
    April 19

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    We get some food from the pantry, that people kindly donate.
    Can I interest you in some "Corn Flakes"? They’re dry, but still taste great.
    We don't have much, but what we've got, we'll gladly share with you!

    a good sentiment and a kind heart.


    • Gunther gold member
      April 19
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      Thank you for the comments and applause. I really appreciate it! The homeless issue is something I have worked with for several years now and I only wish that we could make some headway.
      Thank you again for your kind words.---Mark


  • Wolfdog silver member
    April 17

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    Superb Plus

    Wow, a humorous look at a very serious problem, more serious than those who have never been homeless realize. All they see are those few single men, who have no where to go in the day time because the shelters close during the day. I wish politicians could be forced to be homeless, for at least 60 days, without any resource to their finances. Maybe they would learn some compassion and quit cutting the funding for our Social Safety Nets. The governor, here in Washington wants to do just that. How heartless!
    Luckily some state legislators are fighting against it. I'ld rather see the politicians cut their own salaries and benefit packages first--by at least 50%.
    Of course they would never have the guts to do that.
    Also, any illegal, or unjustifiable, property tax exemptions could also be revoked, in order to finance the social safety net.
    Thanks for a most excellent write.


    • Gunther gold member
      April 17
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      Thank you for your comments. I really appreciate them!
      You're right! Our local governments need to quit ignoring this situation. It's only getting worse. Watch and see these numbers skyrocket in the next 5 years. It aint going away .
      Thanks again for your kind words.---Mark

  • Brian A
    April 16
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    As I have been on both sides of that predicament. I can strongly empathize with this poem. I'd like to comment further but I'll need you to put the form in the authors notes.

  • Isn't that just the most sad predicament we could find ourselves in!
    Seems like it's rushing at us like a freight train.

    ~ You can't stop a Trane...
    but you sure can sleep in its' box!


    Very good piece of writing Gunther!
    Very nice...


    • Gunther gold member
      April 13
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      Thanks for reading it! I really do appreciate it! Nice reference to the Trane at the end. Don't throw anway any boxes dude!


  • el dia
    April 9
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    So sad ! so impressive ! so real ! .... i liked it

    • Gunther gold member
      April 9
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      Thank you for you kind words. I'm glad you liked it!


  • Lady Water
    April 8
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    Great

    Simply great. What a wonderful poem!


    • Gunther gold member
      April 9
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      Thank you for reading my poem. I'm glad you liked it . It's an important subject to me. Thank you again.


  • agazeley gold member
    April 8

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    Sad but true . .

    Only in America ?
    or Also in America

    In the last war that is how we all lived - except we were being bombed as well . .

    It so sad that man just cant improve himself . .

    Albert.


    • Gunther gold member
      April 9
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      I can't imagine how tough it would be to have to live with a War in my own backyard. Mankind leaves something to be desired. Thank you for your kind words.
      Peace, my brother!

  • That was wonderful and very well written! It is so sad that this is actually happening around the world. Homelessness is something people make fun of and put others down for...thinking it is only something that happens to bums. This was great and was totally deserving of the spotlight!


    • Gunther gold member
      April 7
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      Thank you so much for the kind words and the read. This subject is very near to my heart as I have worked with the homless for the last 7 years. There are some real tough stories out there. Thank you again!


  • meushi
    April 7
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    wow! That definitely describes what is going on! You write very well.


    • Gunther gold member
      April 7
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      Thank you for your comments and kind words. I really appreciate that you read my poem as it means a lot to me! Thank you again.


  • LittleAnn
    April 7

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    That was touching... I'm glad you took the time to write this and share it on AP, it's a poem everyone should read because it makes you think, the kind of write that opens the reader's eyes...

    Once again, thank you!
    Keep on writing!
    Annie


    • Gunther gold member
      April 7
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      This is a subject near to my heart. Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. It means a lot to me!

  • oldpoets
    April 7

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    Great write expounding the plight of the homeless. I wrote the streets od dispair begore this mess happened in our land. Your words must be joined by others in the writing commity.


    • Gunther gold member
      April 7
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      Thank you for the kind words. This means a lot when people take the time to see what's happening in this world of ours. Thank you again for reading my poem!

  • graybeard
    April 6

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    So true for so many these days. Been heading for this for quite awhile, too bad more people didn't see it coming. Touching write.

    • Gunther gold member
      April 6
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      Thank you for reading this poem. It really means a lot to me and my friends.

  • If you don't have money in America, you better have family.


    • Gunther gold member
      April 6
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      Thank you for your comment. By the way, could you spare some change. ( just kidding) Thank you for reading this poem.

  • I'd give you the golden chalice if I could. This piece is very heart-warming, and also heart-breaking at the same time. I'm at a loss for words... your friend's sad story was very well written, capturing the reader's (mine, at least) empathy and imagination. I like how the subject in your poem was able to stand tall admist his burden of homelessness. Wow, keep up the great work!! And thank you for sharing your thoughts. We need more people like you in this cold world. Peace always, xx Cyn xx


    • Gunther gold member
      April 6

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      Thank you very much. Working with the homeless is both rewarding and sad. There are some really increadible people that are in terrible situations. Thank you again for reading this poem. I just want people to be aware.

      • You are a true saint. Not many people would bother to give their time like you do, reaching out to help our own downtrodden right in our own front yards... I really admire people like yourself... so thank you for being you!! xx Cyn xx

  • SadmanJim
    April 6

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    WOW!

    tried to leave a comment, and the internet ate it. Thankfully, I had "copied" it so I could re-paste below.
    JT

    A perfectly dreadful and yet true occurence, summed up beautifully and made personal. I myself am thankful every day that I have this job, writing commercials, and that we are still in our house, with food and a table to serve it on. We do our best to donate "real" food when we are able, as opposed to the dry cornflakes...stuff that my wife and I would actually eat. Thank you for this poem... it should be on the front page, and I am going to nominate it for such.

    Write On!
    jIM


    • Gunther gold member
      April 6
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      Thank you very much for your kind words and nomination. I have worked with the homeless as a volenteer for 7 years now and We don't seem to make much progress. This is a real problem that can happen to anyone in very short order. I wish more could be aware.
      Thank you so much for reading this and the nice things you said.

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