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On The Mound

The conductor is tense and nervous
The stage is set
a man moving on 3rd plate, another looking at 2nd
With a single movement it begins
The "dance" commences
Perfect Timing and Flow
and throws...

hits it high
As the viewer in target with the ball
    pop up and caught
and quickly tosses
---to home---
---to 2nd---

Taking in the perfect triple play

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