The Lone Willow,
Its leaves drooping,
As though it mourns.
Forgotten Times,
A somber silence,
Falls on this town.
A symphony of Hope,
As the last dew drop settles,
And all is forgiven.
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very sombre.
but also very peaceful towards the end
♥ it
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These trees are very haunting and very enchanting at the same time. JUST LIKE YOU!
but only in the good ways of course 
do willow trees really have leaves? they don't look like leaves...
ily!
-Parker!
Post Script, your face is a symphony of hope.
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This is beautiful. Subtle in it's agony. It's a great write.
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very nice
it is a very well piece keep them coming and also thanks a million for sharing
I will be reading you again
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The willow tree is such a beautiful, sad tree. I don't have any willow trees near my house but I want one in my yard when I grow up. I think it would be a perfect place to sit and write poetry.
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nicely written
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AmAzInG
you have got an amazing ability to express things in your poetry. Its a great write. well done.
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wow. You've got talent! I must admit You're work is inspiring I hope you make it far.
Sincerely,
♥ VioletnSerenity♥
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the willow, long written about...you bring a fresh twist to a subject that has meant so many things to many people...I liked the picture...thanks for sharing...peace and light, kp
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Hey! Cool screen name and you can write too! Bonus!
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this is very pretty i love it
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ooooooooh! this is really good. describes the picture perfectly
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Oh how I love the weeping willow trees. This is a really good write you have here. It wa a pleasure to read.
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awwwwwwww
i like it. its sad. its...well...RALLY GOOD. ur a good writer u should read some of my poems.
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wow
this is just beautifully melancholic
such a refelctive piece, and soothing in a sense, just makes you feel peaceful and i came across this at just the right time, thanks for posting this and for having such an amazing way with words
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I like it! its cute. <3
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This poem is truely amazing,
Very shory and yet it explained so much.
Loved it a lot(:
*Perfectly Imperfect&*
Mashell [Macabre]
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beautiful poem.....sorrow and silence and solitude ending with a hope was interesting to read..
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very nice!
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Very well written. I like it.
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i like ur style girli
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awws.
i have always liked the things you've written. you never cease to make me happy. i love the imagery. very much.
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Wow Kellena
I love this, it is amazing.
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Very well written Kels.
I loved every bit of it.
(:
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"As though it morns"
You've given spirit to the Willow D.L.
Well done .
Smiles
Gabor
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Wow this was amazing. I could relate to what you were saying. The tree actually made me think it was about me at first lol Wow, I'm weird. This is beautiful Kels!
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Wow
It's like the calm after the storm...when everthing is recovering and the sun is coming out. Just as a rainbow shows hope for a beautiful day after such storms. Love and acceptance show hope in the same way with arguments between lovers.
very well done, my love,
-Dustbunni-
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