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a blank note
glides a lightless road
alone

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 20
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    I have lingered over this one a long time. It is a poem of astonishing clarity.


  • Maldronah
    April 6
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    arrow leaves the bow
    unerring, predetermined
    the vanishing point