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Shards Of Dest-any

As you look up
what do you see?
You see the Glass
Stained and beautiful.

You protect it
with everything you have.
can you protect it
from your own intuition?

Intuition that says
break it.
Prove that it
isn't immortal!

You pick up the rock,
smooth and round.
Shall you throw it?
Shall you drop it and walk on?

Throw it.
Intuition has struck again!
A perfect throw,
out of your hands before you knew it.

The glass falls around you
beautiful and elegant.
You dance in its beauty
Consequences come later.

Its over, glass everywhere.
There is only one thing to do.
Rebuild it.
To your own ideas.

Your own ideas,
your own colors,
your own choices,
your own project.

Slowly you rebuild,
slowly you mold it.
Into a beautiful portrait
of a time well gone.

A time of eternal bliss.
A time of happy-ness.
a picture of you,
dancing in the shards.

You come to realize
that this is your destiny.
A mural of bliss,
to pass on to the next.

As you step back,
to admire your art,
you notice a child
familiar all around.

A child like you,
not long ago.
Longing for something more
than the passage of normality.

You know what you must do,
even before intuition strikes.
You pick up a rock.
Smooth and round.

You bend down
and give the child the rock.
" Keep this safe till the time is right"
Is all you say as you walk off.

The child sits there
Confused and amazed.
Looks up and smiles,
as intuition strikes...

Author notes

basically my first poem in a while actually.
spell checked and im pretty sure its also gramatically correct as well, not like my notes eh? just dont quote me.

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Comments

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  • Emm Jayy
    April 25

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    I really really like this one... It's the first one of yours I've really liked since the eclipse one...

    I'll follow the trend... Who?

  • who is this to?


  • Rize
    April 11

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    your so gay...and i also think that you should say who it's to...maybe that person will read your comments before your poem...do things backwards...i like it that way...hmm...good tho, very insightful...


    • Izu
      April 12
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      your gay

      • Rize
        April 18
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        tell me something I haven't already figured out my dearest cousin

        • Izu
          April 26
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          um alittle short midget wont come and visit me.

  • who is this to?

  • Yeah, who is it to?

  • You said it was to someone...who?

    • Izu
      April 7
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      eh when the person who its to asked i shall tell them.

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