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Nature Sings

nature sings and waits for applause
when people ignore it she gets mad
and lets off steam in a cruel way

 

people give thanks for being alive
for a short time nature is worshiped
it grows quiet
knowing that it's all fake

 

nature weeps at night 
finally she blows
showing no mercy

 

we must start all over again

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  • Swan song gold member
    April 17

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    Just like that!!! Very nice and very true
    I like the ending to this poem it enchances the suddeness that nature can change things

  • Judith Chandler
    April 14

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    I agree. In the long term, we don't give nature enough respect and then there are consequences.

    Enjoyed your write.


  • maralisa silver member
    April 6
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    a wonderful write thank you for sharingmaralisa

  • Brudegal
    April 6
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    such a true message. good wok


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    April 6

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    She can do that.

    She can wipe the slate clean anytime....

    Nice work.

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