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True and Real

You were always so quiet
I never really got to know you
Then one day we started flirting
You asked me to be your girlfriend and I was completely taken aback
Whoever would want to date me I had asked myself for ages
But there you were with your deep dark eyes seeking me out
The past two months have flown by and I have fallen completely in love with you
I think about you whenever I'm not with you
Every text I get secretly hoping it's from you
Then my heart spilling over when it is
It's like my own private love story
You make me feel better when I feel lousy
I may be young but I am overfilled with love for you
You are my whole world now
You're my romeo and I'm your juliet
All I know is this love is true and real
I love you!

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