I'm a bad girl
I know
Maybe I am getting what
I deserve
Who knows?
I've missed you
So now I am supposed
to say something sweet
Well, my love.
I have three words
for you.....
Cracked-never broken.
Author notes
I haven't slept since Friday..It's Sunday. Im reasonably sure I'm going nuts. lmao...This was actually inspired by my friend who says I'm ridiculous right now..long story.
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oh nice! WOW ARENT YOU PISSED! yay luv it. i should remember that. i think it would make me happier
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I like bad girls.
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Never let'em see ya break,girl. Clever write...
Stacy
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wow
cracked-never broken - it's clever, great write, sometimes going a little nuts can make our writing more interesting other times not so much, hang in there.
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Cracked-never broken. love this ..as I feel this most of the time.. to crack or be cracked Love this Hun Hugs Angel♥
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you are so bad it's good.
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amazing write...
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This one is great!
I love the battered not beaten feel to it.
Hang in there. -
haha I think the title and the last line fit perfectly. Short, witty, and hilarious haha...my three favourite things...for a poem that is. Anyhoo...awesome poem and thank you for commenting on mine
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aahhh..
you're such a clever writer! I LOVE THIS..short but very strong write, and your ending is impactful..
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beautiful
cracked or on crack? jk... hope you found some rest. awesum sauce here!
peace
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hehe
absolutely perfect
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Really like your style nener fail to come up with the goods. naughty and nice then cruel your amazing.always
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my tooth is broken
there's a great big hole
I have to pulsate torrents of wash inside my mouth to get food out
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another fantastic write..maybe lack of sleep is good for the mind
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I love the two contrasting tones here: submission and defiance.
Nice job =)
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Nice rhyme scheme... like an egg or a sidewalk? Idk. Sleep deprivation leads to psychosis, nurse addiction...
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