Bite me.
Make me feel it.
Pull-
Harder-
Run yourself through,
Untangle my mind.
Set the wild nature free
One last time
Before comb becomes catacomb.
Author notes
prompt: fine toothed comb
Definition (just in case) : Catacomb- A cave, grotto, or subterraneous place of large extent used for the burial of the dead.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by deadcolor dreams.
550 points, ended April 5, 9 entries
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Comments
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Great job. I love the way you ended it. Really makes the "teeth" aspect pop out of the comb.
Good luck and thank you for entering.
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