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E Mo Tion.

Sys tem at ic.
Making static.
Pedal lightning.
Up the line.

Pump the ir on.
Spark the fire.
Click click click ow
click. gas burn.

Here is a manufactured, acrobatic, dancer.
Watch her legs bend down and up
and see her gyrate faster.

System atic. Dan cer.
Can not con tract can cer.

Gears on gears turn.
Lacking concern.
Do the job
And do it right.

Speed the pro cess.
Feed in excess,
cracked-up coals
and oily spite.

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  • Heavens Child
    April 20

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    I really like the way you've constructed this. It captures the attention of the reader. I also like the ending lines, very powerful. Well done!


  • Salt Therapy
    April 5
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    very interesting demarie, very very interesting.