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Renji's Guilt

the blackness around me
the shadows that aren't my own
your shadow Rukia is the only one I know

and among the classes we rise ranks but hidden sorrow
I could have never made it without you by my side

you left, you disobeyed, I carried an order and had to pay
for being a messenger boy
would you forgive me?
would any fight mater?
the blackness around me
Rukia your shadow is the only thing
that calms me
so I will fight for you

Author notes

what drives renji to be victorious in a fight

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  • I adored this!!! I know that you will not only do great in my contest but you will always be a great writer!