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Please tell me
Its not too late
Take away this suicidal hate
Why are you just standing at the gate

Knock at my door
Say you don't care anymore

Take away my pain
Through that which is slain

Bleed me to death
Take away my final breath

Watch my soul die
Something which God would never design

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  • deathwillcome
    April 6

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    this poem is awsome... how do u keep writing amazing every time... i love how it rymes and it works... i love how it is meaning full. there is emotion, and feeling placed into this poem that you can feel when you read it... i love it... keep up the amazing writing and i cant wait to read more.... (smile)