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Strawberry

your tired dull eyes from a pure blue sky
Kurosaki and Zangetsu
the blossom over the seven moons
as I entered those white desert fields of Hueco Mundo
and the hollow always known me
your entitled to smile for yourself

but luck and karma always blocked me
my dreams caught to her sleeve of white
and rocked along the tarnished river
and swam for her life

to find a way in that castle
my strength is still not there yet
but I climb with friends and swim in a sky free

and I will show the light through fragile wings
iron bars to break away

and hinder the skies below our hopes
ride through and will see a new day
ride on and i'll see you through
on butterfly wings

Author notes

my favorite character is still Ichigo
but my 2nd and 3rd are Toshiro and Kenpachi

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  • I loved this poem it was absolutly beautiful and i wish you well in my contest!!!