I keep fallin' to my knees praying to you
But how long will i have to wait?
I want the day to come that I can see you face
I've got nothing left but you.
Do you see me?
I've got nothing but you.
Father, Please turn to me.
One rose in a huge bouquet,
One tear on a dying day
Could you, who created things so much bigger than me,
Hear the enormous noise of the ocean
And the silent breaking of my heart?
I'm only one person,
But I'm yours and I need you.
So, If your as perfect as I know you are,
Would You come close and hold my heart?
Father I'm scared. Still scared to die.
Because I could miss out on so much, There's never enough time.
But if this is what you want, I'm done asking why.
I've got nothing but you
Father, Please turn to me.
You're all I have
Please Turn and run to help me.
One rose in a huge bouquet,
One tear on a dying day
Could you, who created things so much bigger than me,
Hear the enormous noise of the ocean
And the silent breaking of my heart?
I'm only one person,
But I'm yours and I need you.
So, If your as perfect as I know you are,
Would You come close and hold my heart?
Their are SO many things I cant understand, So I'll cling to the promises you made.
And, I dont know what I'm doing but I'll do all I can,
To hear You call my name
"One tear in the driving rain,
One voice in a sea of pain
Could the maker of the stars
Hear the sound of my breaking heart?
One life, that's all I am
Right now I can barely stand
If You're everything You say You are
Won't You come close and hold my heart.
Hold my heart, could you hold my heart?
Hold my heart. "
Author notes
This Is My interpretation of the song Hold My Heart by Tenth Avenue North. They are my favorite band in the world and this is my favorite song of theirs. This is about feeling totally forgotten by even God and feeling so ordinary that you have no chance of him noticing you to help you. It always reminds me to chin up and it helps me see that he DOES hear you AND he DOES love you.
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Comments
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An excellent interpretation of the song and also a very sincere, honest and heartfelt prayer--
The last stanzas are outstanding--
"One tear in the driving rain,
One voice in a sea of pain
Could the maker of the stars
Hear the sound of my breaking heart?
One life, that's all I am
Right now I can barely stand
If You're everything You say You are
Won't You come close and hold my heart.
Hold my heart, could you hold my heart?
Hold my heart. "
Very, very well penned!
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awesome
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