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Waiting

Perched atop a primal pedestal,
Every curve cosseted with pure silk,
I await perfection.

Intricate maps adorn my body -
Revealed as fine fabric falls -
I await a tender touch.

Still waiting.

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Prompt: http://heise.deviantart.com/art/angel-sanctuary-1-118197445
Words: 32

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  • Flowergirl
    April 19
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    very nice work i love it keep up the gret work....


  • hisaddiction
    April 12
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    ha...

    This is so good it's ridiculous!


  • Kathraina silver member
    April 10

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    Lovely take on the prompt!
    So much said in so few words. Very powerful.
    Bravo!



    ♥ Kate


  • Mariana gold member
    April 6
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    This is a wonderful take on the prompt.  Well done!

    Mariana


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    April 5
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    oh this can be taken as a shadow waiting in the dark,lol
    nice one indeed
    good luck
    MM


  • maralisa silver member
    April 5

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    a wonderful take on the image promt good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    April 5
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    Lovely take here. I enjoyed the read.

    Good luck.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 5

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    enjoyed your take on this piece..i too am still waiting ...

    wishin you the best

    Passions

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