Everyone saw the drop in the ocean
But no one saw the tear fall from my face
Everyone felt the change in the weather
But only i felt my heart freeze over
Everyone saw me on my knees praying
But only i knew i just wanted the pain to go away
I wished for rain as i stood in the desert
But only because i wanted everything to wash away
I wish i could be holding you close
Because when im with you nothing matters
I spend weekend after weekend
Drinking myself numb and to sleep
Only so that i can dream of me and you
everyone sees me everyday
But i have only opened up to you
Only you see the real me.
This is a poem from a while ago, what do you think?
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Beautiful!!
This made me want to cry. I love this..it's absolutely amazing. It has a really good flow to it and there is so much emotion that I actually can feel your sadness and pain..and that is something very hard to do..Bravo!! You are very talented. I love your work. Keep it up.
~Kayla
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Haha thanks, you make me feel good about my writing.
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I can see the real you in this Cody..a person in search of someone special. I know you will find her. Thanks for presenting this work. You are a talented and gifted poet!
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Too bad she doesnt deserve a song
but its still an amazing and life-changing poem and u inspired me forever!!!
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very good n well put
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wow your poems keep amazing me with your poems your really good and your a football player wow
seriously keep writting
bravo
x-skylar-x
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