Cold, ivory skin.
Covered in the blood of her victim.
She goes back, to her house.
To be met by a dark haired stranger.
The same complexion, the same scent.
Sweet, Sickly sweet.
He grins, as he tells her.
That he had been waiting for her.
Confused, but slightly amused.
She takes his hand.
As he leads her up,
The spiral staircase.
Steam escapes the marbled room,
As the hot water, cascades from the shower head.
The vapor, as they stand in the bathroom,
Undressing,
Breezes across their skin.
Forming beads of condensed water.
On their skin of white steel.
He pushes her, as she steps back into the shower.
The water slowly covering them both.
Shes shaking a little,
Quaking.
As he runs his fingertips along the flesh of her stomach.
Placing his palm firmly on her stomach, he pushes her against the back of the shower,
The cool marble cold against her warmed skin.
And with his other hand, tracing up the side of her thigh.
She lifts her leg, and coils it around him,
Pushing her icy lips to his,
Slowly, passionately kissing,
Tongues colliding.
He pulls her closer, forcing their bodies to merge,
As he enters her,
She wraps her arms around his neck,
Tracing her lips down to his the base of it,,
As her teeth graze the skin, playfully.
Before sinking in,
He lets out a slight moan,
As they move to one beat, one rhythm.
Nails, digging into skin,
Scratches, Louder noises.
Screams of pleasure,
Mixing in with the music they move to in their heads.
That one song.
The water, still soaking.
Mixing in with the blood washing from their skin.
And the bodily fluids they both share.
The water, draining,
Down the plughole.
Swirling, twisting, Twirling.
Author notes
Allrightey then.
I tried.... xD.
My friend said i should try... and i did... i uhm...
Really dont know what came over me, my apologies xD.
Im starting a "seven deadly sins." thing.
Starting with lust.. xD.
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very intriguing piece. words expressing such powerful and insightful obsession of lust. one that can overcome a person and in some instances be dangerous. outstanding write.
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erm wow that is one steamy shower lol great job thanks for entering
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wow..
love the use of imagery. i really liked how expressive it was and how sensual, yet innocent it was kept. very nicely done
good luck
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very dark and expressive poem
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Fave part: As he runs his fingertips along the flesh of her stomach.
Placing his palm firmly on her stomach, he pushes her against the back of the shower,
The cool marble cold against her warmed skin.
And with his other hand, tracing up the side of her thigh.
She lifts her leg, and coils it around him,
Pushing her icy lips to his,
Slowly, passionately kissing,
Tongues colliding.
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Oh man! this is really good. :]
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This is WOW! I loved it, and it reminds me of Edward and Bella in Breaking Dawn. Well written and good job!
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And what better lustful sin that sex and vampirism? I don't read vampire poetry as much as I used to, but they are still some of my favourite erotic characters. They are so dark and mysterious and dangerous and sexually charged. Electric, really. You could have added more detail and metaphor, but I still enjoyed this piece quite a bit.
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Excellent imagery, it felt like I was really there. lol, Though if I was really there it would be awkward lol. Great work.
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Right I have a new fetish! lol,
this is amasing very kinky the imagery is fantastic a brilliant erotic write
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