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Pain

One day I hope to be like you,
wild,free,crazy,and happy.


Will that day ever come?

 

It seems like I'm always down.
I'm afraid of reaching out.

 

Some mornings I wake up
wishing that I could still sleep

 

maybe

I'll get lucky one day
someone will hug me
or

tell me they love me

 

I doubt it


just seems to be my luck

Author notes

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Comments


  • Vintage Chiffon
    May 12

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    Excellent write. I could feel your pain through this and I appreciate your feelings. Thank you for entering my contest and the best of luck to you

    <3Damien


  • Glass Heart
    April 6
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    Wow, great writing. Good luck and thank you for entering my contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    April 5
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    a great write for the image you have broughther to life good luck in the contestmaralisa

  • AsianGal
    April 5
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    Maria

    I like this.