Pucker up Honey

In need of cheering up you say
for his eye has gone astray
this man you call your better half
you're in need of a good laugh
if I were you, here's what I do
you have got to tell him true
when looking at another lass

pucker up and kiss my ass.

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A contest entry

MY SAD HEART NEEDS CHEERING UP by lovingpoet. 1375 points, ended April 6, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
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ENTER ANYTHING. by perfectsunset. 625 points, ended June 9, 57 entries
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Silly, Silly, Silly by misterfish. 950 points, ended July 5, 27 entries
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GuiltedShadow
September 9
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Hilarious!! I love it!!!
queenie
July 18

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this is a real lift on a dull day. i got a good laugh but it didn't blind me to the way this was written so well in its simplistic way and how it still conveys beauty.
misterfish
July 5

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So good! I dont want to mess with you!

Really great work. Thanks heaps for entering. Good luck!
Tzipora
June 23
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haha, lovely.
Bob Fox
June 21
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Lol
Way to go gal. But perhaps that ass is worth kissing. He just might have to wait in line. lol
perfectsunset
June 9

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LOL.. this was phenomenal
and comical and really made
me giggle. hahaha

great job!

Best of luck & thanks for entering
thepoetssoul
June 6

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This is a great laugh, wonderfully written in rhyme and rhythm.
Thanks for sharing, smile always

Tony
Lonesome Dove
June 1

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Love It!!!!!
So beautifully put. This was a very enjoyable read. I'm now smiling from ear to ear. Thank you. I love your take on the prompt and the italics at the end really drive the nail home. Congratulations on a well deserved gold.
Krystanna
May 13
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Perfect
What every girl should do in that situation! I love it!
penman
April 11
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Excellent
what a great write. And so very deserving of the gold. Congratulations.
Patpowers
April 11
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CONGRATULATIONS on the gold! FUNNY PIECE OF POETRY! Your ending was first class! Thanks again!
jazzcat
April 6

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I like this a lot. Cute and well-conceived it definitely put a smile on my face. The ending was perfect!
Birdie
April 6

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HA!
That's great. I love a good ending to a good poem. I like how you read it expecting there to be this ice goey ending and you get kiss m ass. GREAT!
tweet tweet!
Denerica
April 5

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Point well taken, maybe she should also start looking around herself, see how he likes it, but then again, he would use it against her...I think this will cheer her up. Blessings.
lovingpoet
April 5
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you made me laugh thank you so much I loved it
individuality
April 5

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hehehe - let the lips find bliss in a brown coloured kiss - a good fun poem, it made me laugh when i read it.