Twisting, tightening, knoting my insides.
Squeeching, wailing, gnawing my ears.
Blur, isolation, black clouds everywhere.
Sinking under, being sucked adown.
Swirling, twirling, with no control.
Ticking, tocking, time just goes.
Drip, drop, my leaking eyes.
Crick, crack, my broken heart.
Fogged sights, where am I?
Invisable powers, I'm nowhere.
An empty shell, I'm nobody.
In your dreams, I'm happy.
Mumble, grumble, do you hear?
Sighs, cliches, do you care?
Damaged goods, I'm a nuisance.
Burning head, thoughts are on fire.
Twisting, turning, sleepless nights.
Blahdy, blahdy, it's all the same.
Author notes
When my Depression/Anxiety is at it's worst.
Comments
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Very good. What I like about your poems(lyrics?) is the phrasing. Abrupt and powerful
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really good!
i loved it!! =]
good choice on words too!! =] -
This is a wonderful write...the words send deep feelings through me. Familiar scenarios...
Burning head, thoughts are on fire.
Twisting, turning, sleepless nights.
Blahdy, blahdy, it's all the same.
This verse just seems like it speaks my life...I love this poem. Best of luck!
Az
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Last poem so far and they say the best is for last and im not disappointed this poem; wow. I loved it, all the techniques i favour are here and so elegantly put in your fantastic poem, thank you
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