Warrior true;
foe fast approaching
battle echoes stealthily,
floating change of winds beckoning.
Autumn mirrors Winter freezing.
Apprehension and fear palpable,
armour readied;
~changes~
readied armour,
palpable fear and apprehension,
freezing Winter mirrors Autumn.
Beckoning winds of change, floating.
Stealthily battle echoes
approaching fast; foe.
True warrior.
Author notes
Image Credit to: http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://images.epilogue.net/users/lisahunt/
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A contest entry
- PIF by Bear - Courtesy of penman - by Arkbear.
700 points, ended April 21, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congratulations! Beautiful poetry worthy of award. A beautiful form chosen also. Adds much strength to a perfectly written verse.
Best wishes in life and love.
In God's Love
Noah
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This is a great piece that you thought up
for this picture. I love the form that you used
here. All the best to you with it and thanks
a lot for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
You are amazing you know that. I never ever get bored reading anything, it is always so unique and different. I want to be like you when I grow up!! Brilliant. Best to you in the contest
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Good luck in the contest you have such a wonderfully awsome. I hope you win. it was a p[leasure to read.
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Hello Gaylene
So nice to see you bringing me a Palindrome!
Each side reads well, and shows your patience as an Artist to perfect this Form....I find strength in each L....you chose your words wisely and carefully....well done.....you are up against a few good entries....good luck!
Bear -
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a good piece, ah the mirroed verse, i have a couple in my files, they are not easy to do, they take some thought in arranging.
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