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Held

holding back the urge to {crack this shell}
though accustomed to heat

                                              and heart //beating
loud

      I long to s p r e a d my wings--
but take the time to .discover. my nature

I am yellow
and smallmovingslowly

to finally see


                                              the sky

Author notes

Day 2 of NaPoWriMo, challenge was to write from the perspective of an animal. I am a chick in a shell.

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  • Antebellum
    May 8

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    oooh I get it. lol I was confused until I read the A.N

    I dont know what if would feel like to be a chick trapped in a shell...but im sure its damn near close to this.lovely write