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Touched My Heart



Before I met you, I was lost
and fought of love at all costs.
But now you've set my heart free,
I know just where I want to be.

In your arms and never leave,
you made me finally believe.
That love is real and only you,
can hold my heart the way you do.

Thank you for saving me from myself,
for me I know there is nobody else.

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  • Candy Morphine
    April 6

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    The ending is so amazing, It's captured such honest emotions. You have such a fine way of conveying the sweetest of words without forcing them to sound saccharine.


  • Vintage Chiffon
    April 5
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    CONGRADS FOR MAKING THE PRELIMS!!!


  • deadcolor dreams
    April 5

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    Wow, you can do anything can't you? You're a really versatile and talented writer! This was simple, and even though the rhyme wasn't quite right- it still made me feel tingly!

  • Vintage Chiffon
    April 5

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    I know the poem seemed very simply, but to me it was portrayed in a much more exquisite way than the other ones in my contest.


  • Vintage Chiffon
    April 5
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    Wow...This to me was a tear jerker...I loved it...I wish my ex would say this =p

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