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Begging

Eyes like marbled candy
chocolate to the core
upon skin I taste violets
admiring her flesh decor
the beauty marks inspire
soft under exploring hands
wildly my eyes devour her
begging to ride again
twinkling dark masses smile
her eyes they are the cause
of my everlasting wanting
fingers rub, gently massage
I find myself entangled
inside her limbs so long
I feel as though her beauty
in my arms forever belong

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