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Silver Comfort

Darkness half eclipses the moon.
Silver slithers peek from behind unseen clouds:
swirling, smiling, whispering secrets
into upturned ears.

Who would choose the sun
over the mysteries of the night
that intrigue and comfort,
all in the same dark breath?

Silence; only ever true at night.
When blinking stars fall through the
dark heavens to land next to lonely
souls, wasting their last wish.

Who needs a friend
when the universe is under your control?

Who needs love
when there is so much still undiscovered?

Only weak; only fragile.
Only those who have
been born without
any mind of their own.

To think,
  learn,
    discover,
      revel.

Alone.

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