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Flower Petals

Petals
They are just
petals... after all
But so delicate
like ashes on your fingertip
don't rub them away
Petals
they are just petals
after all

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    April 6

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    welcome to allpoetry

    Love the visual effects you did, and this is a beautiful piece. After all... quite effective.

    ♥
    Shawna
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    • namelessdweeb
      April 8
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      Wow! Thank you. I definitely don't think highly of my poetry very much at all. And I was having such a bad day today, too! But this comment made me feel much better. Thank you!


  • raspberry Greeters member
    April 6

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    This is just sooo beautiful!! Very very beautiful.. neat poem.. delicate.. artistic!! Well done.

    Archana
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    • namelessdweeb
      April 8
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      Thank you so much! I thought maybe this poem was too short and plain and boring... But I guess not! Hahah. ^^