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Treasure

It was wrapped up totally
With no clue to its worth
Treasure seekers passed it by
Unconscious of its intrinsic value
Until I looked into her eyes

Those eyes of diamond
Like the magician’s crystal
Took me in beyond those wraps
Deep into a heart of platinium
Revealing a priceless gem

She wore a chocolaty skin of copper
And smiles radiating slendour as gold
Her sonorous voice sang to me
As she looked every inch pure silver
And so green like fresh foliage

She displayed lips of roses
With a gorgeous rounded build
All so feminine
She had gracefulness all over her
Yea, the very essence of a woman

Care is her middle name
All she is, is frank innocence
Her babily naivety
Makes you want her cuddled up
To protect this rare treasure

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  • white stone
    April 8

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    Beautiful. Really. The caps threw me off a bit, but the content is truly romantic.INNOCENSE-innocence