help me if you can i'm feeling down
i'm being run right into the ground.
looking all over for a lending hand
for someone to lead me away from this frozen land.
is it you?
is it me?
i need some help to find my tranquility.
things aren't going quite right.
they haven't been for some time now.
i'm walking backwards through the crowds
i haven't seen a helpful face around.
searching for so long
didn't realize i needed to be so strong.
i've been so lost and blind
i'd give you anything i've got
for a little peice of mind.
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2) Help!
A contest entry
- Beatles. by Emmyb.
900 points, ended April 13, 11 entries
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that is really good!! =]
i enjoyed it!
i can kinda relate to that at the moment! =]
goodjob! <3
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Nice take on the prompt. This actually feels like it should be a bridge in a Beatles song.... I like the rhyme and the rhythm of the words, nice flow. Great line—"I'm walking backwards through the crowds."
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thank you very much for your kind words.
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Well penned !
I like this poem. It flows well. Thanks for sharing and good luck in this contest
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thank you, i'm glad that you enjoyed it.
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clever little rhyme in there. made me smile.
certainly a heart felt poem. :-
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