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Unalive

You and me.
Its always been that way.
Your hands and mine.
Your strength, my weakness.
Sometimes I wanted to scream it out.
Tell the whole world that I've loved you.
But they would not understand.
How could they.
You don't exsist.

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  • The Fun House silver member
    April 17

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    A lot of good emotion flowing through this piece and I like the wistfulness about this piece, as though you are pondering to the stars.