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Love Said, Forever (But This Time, He Meant It).

 

 

They told me that love is like a fire, burning bright

but I think it's like a circle - if there is no break in the circle,

it will go on forever and so will we.



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(I)
Hearts scribbled on pieces of paper,

his initials in block letters, rose red

the shade of passion each petal,

an eternal example of euphoria

and his promise.

It is no wonder his initials spell S.L.Y,

for he found his way into my heart

as if a burglar, he broke through walls,

security spent years trying to barricade.

Started as sensual, just a touch of lips

and then, something vibrated inside of me

and I started to believe.

(II)
I was never the type of girl to dream

of wedding dresses and pickered fences,

but when he called my name, I changed;

now my sighs seek reunion

and 'will you take me forevers' make,

an important appearance, never expected

to be brought to tears by declaration of love.

(III)

I am finally the girl innocence tore from me again,

wanting pretty ribbons in her hair and flowers in her dreams

and that's thanks to loves spell upon my once broken heartbeat.

His whispers of 'you're safe now' and 'you're beautiful to me' -

they saved me from the madness of the cruelty of the past

and lead me to the door of missed opportunity.


(IV)
He made life worth living, in simple tenderness

and I thank god for oxygen as I could never have enough.

Author notes

Inspired by Lowercase Preludes contest, with the quote.


This is about how Stuey has captured me and how, he has made me capeable of love, without even being conscious of it. He is wonderful and this is what true love means to me.

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Comments

  • This is beautiful and very sweet

    it's lovely when you find someone who can make you feel like that.

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  • I'm glad to see that someone had made you this happy.
    Great take on the prompt

    This is very well penned

  • beautiful sweetheart im glad you are happy