The first time, I fought because I thought I didn’t want it.
Even when the pleasure shook my body, I still refused it.
The stinging; the soreness; left an impacting effect.
After a while I dreamt of it. Needed It.
Then I went to my mistress and begged for it.
Each time I close my eyes, I remembered.
The feeling of the cold wood under my breast,
heightened the pleasure and the anticipation.
Each sting of the leather, each soft spoken word,
made me crave it, but I didn’t want to give into it.
I felt such humiliation, feeling of vulnerability washed through me.
My mistress said I was being a bad girl,
that I needed to be taught a special lesson.
She told me to bend over the table and I did.
So excited I was at first, until the first sting.
In the beginning I didn’t understand what was happening.
I couldn’t believe my mistress would do this to me.
Betrayal ran through me with each sting.
And I hated myself even more;
because I absolutely loved it.
The feel of the leather against my skin,
made my body heat up and moan out loudly.
Even though I denied it to my mistress,
even though I begged her for more,
I refused to want it, or even need it.
But I lost the fight that I was so dire to win.
I let myself drown in the pleasure that I hated so.
With each sting, the fight in me dispersed even more,
until the only fire in me was the pleasure building.
And my only relief was the feel of leather against me.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Create Desire (20th Contest) by Trixie08.
1000 points, ended June 10, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great picture it fits the story well. I think you captured what it feels like to be punished for the first time very well. How it seems so wrong but it feels so good. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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I'm impressed
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A slaves first spanking. Very good, but I am a little confused since you refer to a Master as a she and her and not He and Him.
Other than that this is good.
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Mistress Rose
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You have captured the essence of what goes through the mind of a sub the first time they receive a spanking. It is a battle of fear and sometimes shame over desire and pleasure. You got the shame and desire and pleasure. With a little tweaking I think you could get that edge of fear in there too.
An awesome write that you have thought out very well, that really does show here.
Well done
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Jem
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A first spanking is always the roughest on the new sub. You have brought out the essence of that experience with a deft hand that is like the caress of leather on the skin. Fantastic. I would have liked to see more of a darker side of this experience. this is a great piece of poetry and I applaud you for bringing out the struggle within when one stays with the decision of submission.
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I like the direction you went with this, very well thought out and not to mention a great storyline. You captured a subs emotions through her first paddling great.
But, there is one thing that left me confused with this. You talk of a "Master" but you refer to "her" as a "she" ????
My suggestion would be once the round is judged to either change Master to Mistress or she/her to he/him.
Other than that, I see nothing here that needs to be fixed.
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Loved it!!!
That was amazing!! And kinda reminds me of my first paddling... Very well written, the emotions come through really well, too.
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