She walks around on her 'perfect' feet,
flipping her 'perfect'.
She kisses a 'perfect' boy,
with her 'perfect' lips.
She smiles her 'perfect' smile,
and makes me mad 'perfectly'.
Her and her 'perfect' clan start walking away.
I grab her by that 'perfect' hair,
and 'perfectly' slam her head in my locker,
while perfectly shutting the door.
She falls so 'perfectly' on the floor,
and my foot meets her 'perfect' face.
Now she's so 'perfectly' crying,
because she is now so 'perfectly' ruined.
She is 'perfectly' picked up onto her feet,
and dragged 'perfectly' to the office,
me forced to follow.
Now, I'm 'perfectly' in trouble,
but it is so worth it.
Author notes
Short... and after you read 'perfect' will be a weird word. I HATE preps who think they are all so 'perfect'!!!!! That's exactly why I used them in my poem like this.
A contest entry
- The Fakes... by Ami.
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Comments
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LOVE IT!!!
Yes, it's a little 'perfect' write, yet it contains so much raw emotion on such a common situation!! The word selection and place is flawless, oh gosh, I really relished this write!! [yeahh im cool lolol]
brilliant work!!!
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the thing is, most of them don't think they are perfect. i used to believe the same thing, that they were all stuck up bitches, but the truth is they have to hide the same pain as everyone else. they have to deal with the same problems as everyone else. people are people and maybe if we could stop judging each other (even the people who judge us) we would be happier. sorry i know thats sounds so hippish but if you just let people be, your own life becomes so much eaiser.
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normal message.. well put, good job.
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I Hate those girls to -_-
Good write I'd like to do that to
A prep Right now but anyway..
Great Write and Thank You for entering
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