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In Spring I Loved Her

In Spring I loved her
as the world started to thaw
I felt the joy of God in her eyes
as we lay beside each other

In Summer I loved her
the world was hot around us
but in her eyes I saw peace
as we kissed

In Fall I loved her
the world grew old around us
yet I saw the warmth of forever in her eyes
as we made love

In Winter I loved her
the world grew ever drearier around us
but her eyes brought me back to joy
as we sat holding hands

It is Spring again and I love her
the world do what it will
in her eyes I see she loves me
as we celebrate our year.

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If you do not have love, may you find love. If you have love, may it stay with you forever.

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  • Beautiful

    A lovely read.i wished summer could've been longer:-) would've given so much more to it.well done!


  • silverscent gold member
    April 30

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    This is very sweet.
    I loved how you took the relationship though the seasons. Also, how you started at spring, which is of course the season of new things/life.
    Thanks for sharing.

  • tornn2
    April 4
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    I really like this. The wording reflects your emotion and love for this girl.