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Your Bountiful Spirit

My dearest heart,

         There's so much to be said
through tears raining from my soul,
trying to find with perfection the words.

You have been my light
shining within my skies of grey;
a beacon overshadowing
the silences felt of lost hope,
coloring my world
with laughter and smiles.

You have wrapped your warmth
sharing unspoken messages of love
with each tender embrace.
Like a rose,
a blossom held with heartfelt beauty~
unique perfection.

As digits intertwined
grasped in lasting completeness;
life's rhythmic beat envelops coldness.
Touched by compassion,
the essence of your bountiful spirit;
loving you comes easier with each rising sun.

Thoughts of you
reign deep within my mind
as tears fall like rain from heavens.
Wondering how true is your love,
will it ever measure mine for you;
or am I  headed toward desolate promises?

Whatever the future may hold,
know we shall always hold a special place
that resides in our hearts.

               Love forever always,
                             Me xxx

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Option 1 - Write a letter to someone about anything, maybe stopping them from drugs, or self-abuse, or even love. Can even be to yourself. Just make it sincere, and in letter form please.

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  • Desire gold member
    June 24
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    Beautiful~

    Ooooooooooooooh this is Beautiful~ Adore the emotions also the energy
    Wow~ Precious piece and spoken from the Heart
    Woot! Another one to Love
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart
    Best wishes in all You do
    with love & light~ Desire~*~

  • OurxBeginning
    April 13
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    This is a beautiful write, the emotion is so clear. I thought this was pretty creative. I also enjoyed that it was to your heart. The only thing that through me off was there was a little bit of doubt. Love shouldn't have boundaries. Thanks for entering and good luck.

  • This is absolutely GORGEOUS my dear friend! A stunner of a beauty that reminds me so much of my Greg
    I LOVE this! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT


  • StarEyes
    April 4

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    Ok, time to pull mine out! This is amazing! What a great read this one is! I can feel every emotion, every thought, every feeling! Great job on this one!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta