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Ululate

snow pads the ground and
muted silence encases the world
in a glass box of white.

I scream
then promptly fall
into the deep snow drifts

Author notes

ululate means to scream or howl.

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  • The Fun House silver member
    April 17

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    I like this alot, it has great imagery and really lets the mind roam. Just enough there to make it subtle yet brilliant.


  • individuality gold member
    April 5

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    a good poem ah yes to release ascream then slip into the white cold waves is a good thing at times, it gives us freedom.