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Numb

Those last two words he said
were that which left you numb
when they slipped through parted lips "i'm sorry"
and all that echos endlessly in your head

the weeks that pass turn to months
and your love for him,
still as fresh as a newly blossomed rose
that grief still hits you from both fronts

why?
the only question you continue to ask yourself
what happened?
that which made you so happy, then end so suddenly
that shock postponed your ability to cry

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 19

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    What a sad poem; the emotions just washed over me as I visualised someone saying Sorry at the last moment

    Touching, deep and moving - wonderful poem

    Keep Writing!

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    ~Manda
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