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Distracted

They tell me I have ADD
I guess if you want to put it that way, I do
Yea, i get distracted in class...alot
But its not like random stuff that catches my attention
Just one thing in particular
Him :]
The teacher yells at me again
"Pay attention Ariana!"
Well technically I am paying attention
Just not to the teacher
I suppose I should concentrate for a few minutes
"This dude was famous for killing this guy and he died because..."
Uh oh, concentration slipping again...
I look over at him
He looks so cute right now
His eyes
His hair
His smile
He looks up and catches me watching
Crap! But he gives me a wide smile
Come one...look away ani...concentrate...
"ARIANA PAY ATTENTION!!!"
Sorry teacher!
I guess I'm a little distracted..... ;]

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    April 25

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    This piece is quite cute. It doesn't mean you have ADD when you don't pay attention. Maybe you're just bored.

    It's clear to see you have feelings for this boy. Perhaps you should tell him.

    I'd suggest a little more punctuation
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