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Resurrection

formation of dust
among the land awaiting
to capture bones soul

yet lying dormant across
horizon feeding its mold

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    April 10
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    deep and powerful piece you have penned here, congrats on a well earned bronze for this tanka.

    • saddie23
      April 11
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      Thank you

      Thank you, didn't think I could win among all these other fantastic poets here at this contest. Thank you again.


      • Errant Panther gold member
        April 11
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        you're welcome - I just noticed though your title should be spelled "resurrection" not with the "e" as you have it.


  • Summer52
    April 10
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    Hi, saddie

    Beautiful Tanka entry. Congrats on your Bronze.

    summer51

    • saddie23
      April 11
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. You know its been a while since I did a tanka. Saddie23

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