Sitting on the shelf, I try to look perky as can be,
I hope I get chosen this year, I hope someone picks me.
I'm made from the best milk chocolate money can buy,
Please pick me, I don't want to have to cry.
Last year I was almost perfect shiny and all,
I had such great flavor, I stood up straight and tall.
But no one wanted me, makes me want to shout,
I'm sure I am someone they can't do with out.
What is Easter without me, a chocolate surprise,
Come on you know you want me, I would look good on your thighs.
Take me home, you will never have any regret,
I'm the sweetest taste you have ever had yet.
I know your mouth waters with secret thoughts of me,
Stop fighting it, we were meant to be together, don't you agree
A contest entry
- Partners In Crime New Contest.... by Partners In Crime.
1700 points, ended April 18, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hah, Very well done. This is an adorable yet sassy write. You have great rhythm and well....its just a fantastic poem, good job.
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Excellent
I love this write.
What an enjoyable read.
The picture up there, is hilarious.
Well done.
Congrats on your most deserved trophy.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us.
*S* Cynthia
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hilarious
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hehe nice use of the picture
best of luck
Tasha
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the humoruous side of you always appeal to me. it showcases your great talent because you capture it well. done in your signature couplets this gives the best of both worlds. you show vast talent at all the levels you write on and a poet you truly are. my best to you in the contest.
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Ha ha ha ha Look good on your thighs!! Thats great, so cute, such a sweet write! =) Sweet, very chocolaty write lol
Good Luck
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"What is Easter without me, a chocolate surprise,
Come on you know you want me, I would look good on your thighs."
That is the whole problem with chocolate...today I bought a pound of fudge in four different flavors at the same fudge shop catz and I visited in Cedar Key here in Florida ...I figure it will add a few days worth of strenous dieting...
Cute poem and good luck in the contest...
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Clever poem/insight from the pirate lady. ---- -- True story: Because everyone in Australia has an obsession with exterminating rabbits and people who push doors marked pull believe children grow up to trash cars, over the practice, the Easter people are trying to sell chocolate bilbies (a bilby if you only buy one.) --- They look good on your thighs too. ---- http://www.modnet.com.au/~firefrog/easterbilby.htm ---- --- -- Thank you
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Thank you wattle, i didn't even know about the bilby. Pretty cool information
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Good.
Rhyming "chocolate surprise" with "I would look good on your thighs" was the best line.
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excellent~
LOL
Very cute........
I have a chocolate bar in the frig
A Hershey's.........think I will go get a bite now
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Susan~~~
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LMAO
LMAO, oh lol this made me giggle, especially the bit where you wrote " I would look good on your thighs" ! Very well written partner, as always your humor poems pick me up.
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Oh, yes, my mouth is watering for chocolate... now and always
What a cute poem, Barb... Yummy and enticing
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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i am a devil, i stole their brothers and sisters when shopping but left them because the security guard was giving me the eye a good poem, melting brilliant.
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