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Raspberry Truffles



she offered me
forbidden candy
dark and luscious
on the outside
protected by
a chocolate shell
that when melted
by the tongue
or teased
with the teeth
revealed a soft
pink cream
a sweet explosion
in the mouth
almost orgasmic
bringing forth
moans and trembles
of delight

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  • Lurie
    July 15

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    MMMMMM sounds yummy I love raspberries. I have three bushes in my yard. Only you could make raspberry truffles sound so sinful!! Nicely done Travis!!! Yep I remembered your name. I felt dumb asking you but I was sure i was right.


    • RollingStone silver member
      July 15
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      are you sure this is just about...raspberry truffles?
      thnak you for the comment!


  • StarEyes
    April 4

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    Hmmmmm, well if it were strawberry, then this read would be as orgasmic as the candy I prefer strawberries to raspberries.....hehe. I love this. Great job!


  • NurseChilly gold member
    April 4

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    she did??? well now... she was a bit of a minx!! lolol
    sigh sigh sigh
    almost moaning and slightly hot around the collar... woot


    • RollingStone silver member
      April 4
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      it's just candy, gill!


      • myrataal silver member
        April 29

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        Ol' Freud ...

        would not have believed you! But I do!

        Hallo Travis, how are you? Beautifully descriptive, as always.
        Love
        Myra

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