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Here Comes The Sun.(Rondelet)

Here comes the sun
My love has just come back in sight
Here comes the sun
Time now to rekindle our fun
To hug, kiss, dance, sing with delight
From early morn to dark of night
Here comes the sun

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Title 3.Here Comes The Sun.

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  • DogFish silver member
    April 11
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    ...what a night!


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 4

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    This is pretty neatly written poem, I liked it. it was pretty good. Wonderful flow of words and it was a pleasure to read.


  • Emmyb gold member
    April 4

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    romantic
    were you supposed to write gome instead of come?

    a good effort and nice take on the positive little song. i love that tune, have been humming it all day.


    emmy