HERE COMES THE SUN
After a night of darkness
You and I are One
After a night of darkness
I WANT TO HOLD YOUR HAND
After a night of darkness
ALL YOU NEED IS LOVE
After a night of darkness
HEY JUDE
I think I love you baby!
I know for sure. Not maybe!
Hey Jude
I think I need you in my arms yea
After all you’ve put me through...[X2]
We COME TOGETHER
After a night of darkness
Passion FROM ME TO YOU
After a night of darkness
Its LONG AND WINDING ROAD
After a night of darkness
I was waiting on PENNY LANE
After a night of darkness
HEY JUDE
I think I love you baby!
I know for sure. Not maybe!
HEY JUDE
I think I need you in my arms yea
After all you’ve put me through...[X2]
I can’t just LET IT BE anymore
After all the dreams I saw
Now I’m listening to the sounds from YESTERDAY
And know I can’t let you down
I need to get up and call the wind
Tell it to bring me you
And then make love to you my love
EIGHT DAYS A WEEK again
HEY JUDE
I think I love you baby!
I know for sure. Not maybe!
HEY JUDE
I think I need you in my arms yea
After all you’ve put me through...[X2]
Author notes
So I used most of the titles you provided. Its nothing compared to what they wrote but Im no Paperback Writer
A contest entry
- Beatles. by Emmyb.
900 points, ended April 13, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
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Creative!
This one's very creative and different. so cool how you used all these titles to string together this poem..and its great how they all fit together too.
Me likey it!
Now for some constructive criticism:
1) I agree with the comment below me: It would be better if the titles were not in capitals..kinda obstructs the flow of the poem..edit it
2)
"I think I need you in my arms yea
After all you've put me through...[X2]"
Somehow to me, these two lines seem a bit contradictory. Correct me if im wrong..but the first line is something positive whereas the second line is negative.
Do u want to say that even after all she's put you through you still need her in your arms?
in this case it seems as if you are saying: because she put you through all this, you need her in your arms? But if she's mistreated you, why would you need her in your arms?
dunno... I may have misunderstood them though.
cool poem/song none-the-less.
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see i dont know how this works..
else id applaud ur comment
LOL
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Wow Wow Wow I thought I already read this. O.K. Wow Wow Wow it not the same but it is pretty good.
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Thnx.. feels good to write again..
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im impressed with your effort here.
only thing i would recommend is not to use the capital letters on the song references.
thanks for entering this very entertaining piece
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I do realise that. its just easier on the contest-maker wouldnt you agree??
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