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~ Where I Went Last Night..



Down the seventh sea, and above stormy sky
Through the beach of life, and sunset of death
I was sailing as the white gulls passed me by..
That's where I went last night..
That's where I found the eternal light..

Over the misty white mountain tops so high
Below the abyss of the nights entwining mystery
I was falling as I made my last fragile try..
That's where I went last night..
That's where I found the eternal light..

As the dawn spread its wings, I was so lonely
I was lost and wounded as I followed a new road
I was enlightened as I found God smiling down at me..
That's where I went last night..
That's where I found the eternal light..

Bruises were healing as I reached the eastern shores
I bent on my knees and prayed on the crystal floors..
Mysticism took me where I went sailing last night
World had changed forever, when I found my eternal light..

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A spiritual write

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  • Coldwater
    September 6

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    Hello there, what a super tranquil write this is, so easy on the mind and brings a gentle smile to the face.
    Regards.

  • Basma Mashhadi
    August 8

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    SUPERB

    Quite a superbly-written, truly spiritual poem ... pretty deep ...
    Beautiful words ... "when I found my eternal light"
    love it


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 15

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    Mystic and Profound

    I enjoy reading your light while walking through life's plights, and the divine sight and wisdom to know you're going to be all right. "one day at a time." I love ya to pieces.

    Peace, always with love, Timothy