She ran the gauntlet of time,
knowing the heart of the matter,
didn't really matter at all.
What was she looking for
just another day,
another way-
Leaving it all behind,
having to find herself,
it had all changed along the way-
Just walk, walk, walk,
walk away...
turn around-
turn it around
and find it now,
find it along the way.
In and out,
through it all-
up the river, and
'round the bend,
holding it all
in the palms of her hands,
she had it all
as she ran through
the gauntlet of time-
Author notes
I have noooooo idea folks, hope you like.
Please tell me what you think
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It's beautiful and reminds me a little bit of how I write when I just let the pen take over. Great write and thank you for entering my contest!
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Love it...
Wonderfully abstract, slightly surreal & open to numerous interpretations that make the reader think & ponder their meaning while applying personal experience to your words...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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i think your speaking of love and life, opportunities
its one to get the grey matter working thats 4 sure well done ,
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Excellent
Such a great word choice. So filled with truth. Best of luck in the contest.
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Dear sunshinegirl :
I read this a couple of times and I don't know
what she had in her hands . Without knowing that ,
I can't make any statement of substance about this . Sorry .
Greenwolfe 1962
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A very creative piece, I like this one the natural progression and the changes created, a life along the path so to speak.
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I really like this and I love the expression of running "the gauntlet of time". This is the kind of poem that sparks my own writing muse.
Love,
Amera♥
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your words of love messaged upon downy wings of tender softness even through stoic strenght always brings tears to my soul well done Sis and know in this plane and the heavenly plane you are loved. well done and many blessings always xxx
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Awesome poem mommy, great job i like it
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